Clarity score
A structured 10-point audit rating your page on positioning, clarity, CTA strength, and trust.
01Async clarity audit
Your landing doesn't need more traffic. It needs more clarity.
ClawniLab audits your landing page message, structure, and CTA logic — and delivers a clear, prioritized clarity report in 48h. 100% async, no meetings, actionable from day one.
- 100% async
- Zero meetings
- 48h delivery
- 1 priority page
02Diagnostic
Most landing pages aren't broken. They just don't convert enough.
You might already have a solid offer. Maybe even decent traffic. But when the page is vague, generic, or poorly structured, visitors hesitate, scroll, and leave without converting.
Costly friction points
- Unclear positioning
- Weak or misplaced CTAs
- Missing trust signals at the wrong moment
- Structure that demands too much from the reader
- Objections left unanswered before the CTA
What the audit surfaces
- What you actually do
- Who it's for
- Why you're credible
- Why act now
- What the next step is
03Deliverables
A concrete report your team can act on immediately.
Friction map
The 3-5 specific points hurting your conversion, with exactly why each one is costing you leads.
Priority fixes
Ranked, actionable recommendations — highest ROI first, ready to brief your team or dev.
Hero rewrite example
A rewritten hero headline and subheadline showing the clearer direction as a concrete example.
Trust gap analysis
An assessment of missing credibility signals and where they should appear in the page flow.
Implementation notes
Simple, dev-ready UX notes for each recommended change — no design overhead.
// For whom
This audit is right for you if…
- Early-stage SaaS team with a landing that lacks clarity
- B2B agency wanting more qualified leads from existing traffic
- Studio or B2B service firm with a good offer but a weak page
- Team that wants speed without agency overhead or endless meetings
// Not for you
This isn't right for you if…
- You need a full brand or visual redesign
- You want a complete site rebuild
- Your offer is still undefined
- You need constant calls to make progress
- You expect promises like "3x conversions in 7 days"
04Protocol
How it works
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P.01
→ You
Async intake
You send the landing page URL, your offer, your target audience, and your main conversion goal.
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P.02
→ Lab
Clarity analysis
I audit message clarity, page structure, CTA placement, and trust signal gaps — scored across 10 criteria.
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P.03
→ Lab
Priority report
I produce a written clarity report with your score, friction map, ranked fixes, and a hero rewrite example.
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P.04
→ You
Delivery — 48h
You receive the structured report ready to share with your team or dev. No call needed.
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P.05
↔ Async
Async follow-up
One round of async Q&A included if anything in the report needs clarification.
05Pricing
One audit. One price. No surprise.
Landing Page Clarity Audit
$149
USD · one-time
- 10-point clarity score
- Friction map (3-5 priority issues)
- Ranked action items
- Hero rewrite example
- Trust gap analysis
- Implementation notes
- 1 async Q&A round
- Delivered in 48h
// transmission
Your landing might already have everything it needs to convert. It just doesn't show it clearly.
We surface that in 48h — no calls, no agency overhead, no fluff.
Get my clarity audit →06FAQ
Short answers before you decide
Do I need to attend calls or meetings?
No. The audit is designed to work entirely async. You submit via the form, I deliver the report.
Do you rewrite the whole site?
No. The audit focuses on one priority landing page. The deliverable is a written report — though I include a hero rewrite example to show the direction.
Do you handle design?
No. The audit focuses on message, structure, CTAs, and conversion logic. Implementation notes are kept simple and dev-ready.
What if I want the full page rewritten after the audit?
The audit gives you everything you need to brief a developer or copywriter. If you want ClawniLab to do the full rewrite, reach out — it is a separate engagement.
What is the delivery timeline?
48 hours from when I receive all intake materials. I will confirm receipt within 4 business hours.
Do you guarantee a specific conversion increase?
No. The goal is simpler and more honest: a clearer, more credible, more conversion-ready page. What you do with the report determines the outcome.
07Intake